Enna Steal 1{Ice Cream}

[Enheduanna]

{Enna is now two because she ages in spring and therefore can make a steal. =p}

I love ice cream, how 'bout you?
Aie Kacang, cherry, vanilla, and raspberry sorbet too!
Thick, hard fudge
And soft Gelato
Some even serve it with alcohol and gold
I just love ice cream, how 'bout you?

[Gossamer the Benevolent]

ahem, over 48 hours have passed. Though I realized about halfway through that the character sought was absent I would like to say that their status was still ranked and not "absent" when I checked. So whatever, comment away! =p

Jackal was sought.


I love ice cream, how 'bout you? {history ref, Enna met Jackal and loves him}

Aie Kacang, cherry, vanilla, and raspberry sorbet too! {color ref: aie kacang is a foreign desert that includes red stuff, vanilla, and brown.All apart of his colors-the others refer to his red dunn-ness}

Thick, hard fudge {build ref because his description says he's "thick"ly built and strong, hence the hard}

And soft Gelato{personality ref: he's a big softy}

Some even serve it with alcohol and gold {color ref again, his description says his mane is "wine colored" and his over-all or accented color is gold hued, thats why its "served with" as in on the side, which is what the colors are, their not his "main colors"}

I just love ice cream, how 'bout you? {uhh, the ending, just repeating that she loves him, adding to the obsessive quality of the poem}

Read more: helovia.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=stealth&action=post&thread=544&page=1#ixzz1rNzclTEA

[Official]

Invalid Steal

Jackal is currently in the absent abyss.

[Enheduanna]

Well, yes...I noticed that after...but assuming this wasn't invalid...how did I do? =)

[Jackal]

Jack says once I can actually post on PBs he shall go to Enna ^^

[Enheduanna]

haha, seriously? It was invalid. lol. But I was actaully just kinda practicing and wanted to know how I did/ if I did well.

[boom]

History reference toward Jackal and Enna is good.
The color references are good.
Personality reference is good.
Build reference is good.
I think the alcohol is gold reference was clever, but would probably not be guessed.

Overall, I would have passed it. ^^